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*renin-angiotensin system which: renin-angiotensin system, which (comma) | *renin-angiotensin system which: renin-angiotensin system, which (comma) | ||
*but the beta coronavirues : but the beta coronaviruses | |||
*It,therefore, has infection: It, therefore, has an infection | |||
*The detection of virus: The detection of the virus | *The detection of virus: The detection of the virus | ||
*It attaches with the ACE II receptors: it attaches to the ACE II receptors. | *It attaches with the ACE II receptors: it attaches to the ACE II receptors. | ||
*I think in the causes section, it would be better to mention what are the reasons that stroke-related to COVID-19 happens. For instance, in cardiogenic shock related to COVID reasons includes: MI, MIS-C, Worsening of previous left ventricular failure due to COVID-19, etc. | *I think in the causes section, it would be better to mention what are the reasons that stroke-related to COVID-19 happens. For instance, in cardiogenic shock related to COVID reasons includes: MI, MIS-C, Worsening of previous left ventricular failure due to COVID-19, etc. | ||
Revision as of 23:19, 12 July 2020
Thank you for your great work! There are only a few comments which may help you to improve the page.
You could follow abc format greatly
- I think Dr. Gibson asked us not to make bold any part of the passage, if I am not mistaken.
- Some grammatical mistakes:
In historical perspective:
- reffered :refereed
- struk down : struck
- centuary: century
- blockage of cerebral artery: blockage of a cerebral artery.
- Mao et. al. in his study first reported: Mao et al., in his study,(comma)
- 214 Covid-19 positive hospitalized patients. with COVID-19 in Wuhan: 214 Covid-19 positive hospitalized patients with COVID-19 in Wuhan (dot)
- Yaghi et. al. : Yaghi et al.
- incidence of 0.9% : the incidence of 0.9%
Pathophysiology:
- renin-angiotensin system which: renin-angiotensin system, which (comma)
- but the beta coronavirues : but the beta coronaviruses
- It,therefore, has infection: It, therefore, has an infection
- The detection of virus: The detection of the virus
- It attaches with the ACE II receptors: it attaches to the ACE II receptors.
- I think in the causes section, it would be better to mention what are the reasons that stroke-related to COVID-19 happens. For instance, in cardiogenic shock related to COVID reasons includes: MI, MIS-C, Worsening of previous left ventricular failure due to COVID-19, etc.