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Thank you for your great work! There are only a few comments which may help you to improve the page.
You could follow abc format greatly
- I think Dr. Gibson asked us not to make bold any part of the passage, if I am not mistaken.
- Some grammatical mistakes:
In historical perspective:
- reffered :refereed
- struk down : struck
- centuary: century
- blockage of cerebral artery: blockage of a cerebral artery.
- Mao et. al. in his study first reported: Mao et al., in his study,(comma)
- 214 Covid-19 positive hospitalized patients. with COVID-19 in Wuhan: 214 Covid-19 positive hospitalized patients with COVID-19 in Wuhan (dot)
- Yaghi et. al. : Yaghi et al.
- incidence of 0.9% : the incidence of 0.9%
Pathophysiology:
renin-angiotensin system which: renin-angiotensin system, which (comma) but the beta coronavirues : but the beta coronaviruses It,therefore, has infection: It, therefore, has an infection
The detection of virus: The detection of the virus it attaches with the ACE II receptors:it attaches to the ACE II receptors.
I think in causes section it would be better to mention what are the reasons that stroke related to COVID-19 happen. For instance in cardiogenic shock related to COVID reasons includes: MI, MIS-C, Worsening of previous left ventricular failure due to COVID-19, etc.