Sandbox:ab

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Thank you for your great work! There are only a few comments which may help you to improve the page.

You could follow abc format greatly

  • I think Dr. Gibson asked us not to make bold any part of the passage, if I am not mistaken.
  • Some grammatical mistakes:

In historical perspective:

  • reffered :refereed
  • struk down : struck
  • centuary: century
  • blockage of cerebral artery: blockage of a cerebral artery.
  • Mao et. al. in his study first reported: Mao et al., in his study,(comma)
  • 214 Covid-19 positive hospitalized patients. with COVID-19 in Wuhan: 214 Covid-19 positive hospitalized patients with COVID-19 in Wuhan (dot)
  • Yaghi et. al. : Yaghi et al.
  • incidence of 0.9% : the incidence of 0.9%

Pathophysiology:

  • renin-angiotensin system which: renin-angiotensin system, which (comma)
*but the beta coronavirues : but the beta coronaviruses 
*It,therefore, has infection: It, therefore, has an infection
  • The detection of virus: The detection of the virus
  • It attaches with the ACE II receptors: it attaches to the ACE II receptors.
  • I think in the causes section, it would be better to mention what are the reasons that stroke-related to COVID-19 happens. For instance, in cardiogenic shock related to COVID reasons includes: MI, MIS-C, Worsening of previous left ventricular failure due to COVID-19, etc.
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